DAMN BABY, I'M THE FIRST ONE TO COMMENT THIS ONE. IT'S A CUTE POEM. I WILL ALWAYS LOVE U TOO!

A lovely poem I love the 5th stanza so much emotion. 5/5

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Hmm that was so sweet! great showing and expressing ur lovely words and lovely heart.. im actually smile after read this,, it was really sweet and so sincere 5/5

Hmm a very enjoyable read. The love in this piece screams out at me, the emotion is strong. well written.

My knees get weak, my heart starts to flutter,
My chest collapses, my neck hairs tingle.

My favorite line, this is a very nice depth poem. I like it more than the other two i've commented so far, and it flows a bit more smoothly.

This one was great! Everything! The emotion was really strong, and you got what you were trying to get across in a really effective way. The flow if this poem was way better. One stanza I believe the second one was still alittle off, but still this one was really good!
5/5

I really love the title...
Reminds me of an old song!!!
I loved the flow...
Also brilliantly written...
And it's very emotional!!!
5/5!!!

This is adorable cute poem beautiful im telling you, your very good at writing and i love it :] very creative and great of explaining how much your in love with someone :] i love that feeling when you get when you see that one you love those butterflys and everything and you explain this all well.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Now this poem
you seemed to add more emotion
I like that the most because
I know what your feeling
and I see it through your eyes
cutee poem
5/5
kaila

Now this poem
you seemed to add more emotion
I like that the most because
I know what your feeling
and I see it through your eyes
cutee poem
5/5
kaila

I love the emotion in this poem, its very sweet and i think that it is cool to hear that sort of stuff from a girl, i didnt like the form of it though, could of flown better but still 5/5

Another amazing poem, I normally don't like poems that don't rhyme, but this one is amazing, I'm so adding you to my favorite authors! I gave you a rating of 5 on this one as well, and I hope someday I can find someone who makes me feel this way, cuz in my opinion, this is exactly how you would describe being in love, I can't say enough how much I love this poem <33

Wow this poem is amazing and has so much emotion. It explains alot about love and how it feels when your in love. Very well written!