I LOVE THIS ONE SO MUCH. IT DOES REMIND ME THAT NIGHT! I LOVE U!!

A beautiful poem with some brilliant imagery and emotion.

I cant really believe u have this kind of thoughts... very amazing! i can really feel ur very inspire and i think someone inspires u.. thats why u have made this poet! u have truly a lovely heart and sweet heart. u know i love how u really made a sweet piece of poems.. i love all the 3 poems that i had read from urs.. they are all amazing and kinda very intesting.. u made my face smiling for a moment.. i love it 5/5

I like it, its short but sweet, sounds so romantic too, I could almos picture the moment when reading it. Good flowage.

I love the detail of the poem, and the imagery, but it didn't quite flow to me. I love the way you expressed the emotions!

4/5

I liked this. It was very descriptive! And the emotion was very strong, but like rose petals the flow was a little off, and took something about from the poem. But really good job!

This is simply great...
You're one of my favorites...
I love your simplicity...
It's another 5/5

:] this was a beautiful poem, i really liked this one alot, your lucky to have a man like that and i love special moments like that to have a special idea of something to small like a ring to make something so beautiful you know.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Nice1. pretty fluffy if ya ask me, but that's okay, we all have our fluffy poems. I love this:

The stars and moon join together,
To light up a lovely night.
Every moment we spend together,
Just feels so right.

but there aren't enough syllables in the 4th line, not enough beats. you really need to work on the flow in this poem, it's got potential.

A very romantic concept for a proposal. I like that part of it. It creates a nice feeling! Good job!
*ME*

Aww
I liked the last stanza
it was really cute sweet and touching
although I know this means a lot to you
so let the poem be filled with every emotion
your feeling
I think if you would have wrote how
amazing you felt it would have made the poem
have more of a significence
5/5
kaila

Awww, this poem really touched me, maybe it's just because of how much I love space and being inlove, and you incorporated the two so well, but it was just such a good poem, though you may want to work on your rhyming a little bit, other than that it's great ^_^

Awe. a beautiful poem.
very touching and i like the imagery.
amazing write. 5/5.