Woww muy bonita (very pretty) i loved it soo much. It was really good. you have very good talent. keep it up. i give u a 5/5
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Nice story..wasnt expecting the end would be happy..but finaly a poem that ends happily..

Yeahh i agree with the above comments ^. Very well written poem, powerfully written. Excellent wrok. keep it up. 5/5