This is real sad =[
i hope life gets betta for you...

Never change who you are for someone babe xxxx

U killin me soft wit ur poems, lol

This is pretty good.. i like the concept even though its a sad topic.. but i think you should maybe set it up into poetry form.. like into stanzas .it would read alot better.

but i liked it the way it was. 5/5. good work.

Wow..seriously depressing. Good flow

5/5