Oh wow.. I really felt the emotion in this. It's really good.. 5/5

Wow that was well expressed, it was soo sad and i can relate to it
the flow was excellent and really kept me reading
great work
5/5

I like this poem alot- you are a great writer and i wanted to thank you for the comment.
5/5

I like it, short snappy lines, i like how it twists from kind of happy to more deep.

Wow! you're amazing. you have a way with words. . . .thanks for the comment. again wonderful write 5/5
thanks :)
~*~Amber~*~

Great poem i can relate to it and you do the transition from happy to sad very well good job keep up the good work
5/5