First kiss

by andre   Dec 28, 2007


When my lips fell apon yours
and found that that kiss opened up new doors
my heart is starting to beat fast
I am hoping that our kiss will last
I can hear the angels sing
and that was the thing...
the thing I've been dreaming about
and then and I knew that you were my first love....
without a doubt.

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  • 16 years ago

    by thegirltheydontsee

    I like it its, good, ur flow is off on some points, but for the most part is is good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    first kisses are always special
    a thing to improve on:
    make sure your next poem
    there is something original
    it will draw in an audience
    plus it makes the poem have more of an edge
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra

    Nice 5/5 very good

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