Just Watch ur bbf

by Aussie   Dec 28, 2007


Cold frozen bars, soiled has brick.
stands between me and my friend.
he squirm on the floor,
on the cold stoned floor.
i can't reach to the corner of the room.

his screams, tear me down.
he needs to be in my arms.
NO! there's a way,
I'll try always,
I'll find a way.

he is alone, all alone,
he is blined folded.
my head can't fit through the bars,
my hips can't fit through the bars,
i can't fit through the bars.

he is gone now.
his shell remain.
he fallen,
i failed(him)
Satan didn't failed

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! I felt a chill from this. Emotion poured like rain here. It was clear, simple and wonderful. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    The emotion was very well captured.
    and i liked the wording and the wayy you wrote this. :] it confused me a bit. but still, an amazing poem, nonetheless. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    The expression here is deep, very deep emotions. I totally read each line with some suspense, I had to read it again. Great job.