Oh,my,god,freakin amazing so true!!!!!!!!!i luv u,ur awsome,show in poetry club thurs.

Awwww that was sooo sad but i loved it, i can relate to it
the flow was amazing and it kept me reading, no boring bits in it
good job
5/5

Amazing poem. hello, my name is little girl.

Awwwww so sad.
I know me an da few friends can kind of relate to htis like we be strong for every once but then when we are alon we let our weakness show.

Good Work.

Beautiful poem

Wow, you just kind of summed up my life in a poem, i love the bluntness of it, i love the chronological order and how when you're reading it it never seems to stop, Amazing poem, 5/5

That is amazing! Its just like how i feel. I really love this poem:) 5/5 x

Thnx guys!!! XD

This is intense and very well written. nice job :)

Absolutely amazing. I can't say how many times i've felt like this...