Nice job with the contradicting words. I like how the theme is circling constantly(don't ask me what I mean, I mean what I say). My favorite stanza is:
"Going around
And talking to the people
They have much to say
But none to listen"
because it's so true and how we're all really oblivious to the fact that we care about ourselves because we worry about what other people think. When, in reality neither person could care less about what the other person does as long they think the other person likes what they do(sorry for the mini-rant it just made me think of that). All in all you did awesome with the poem, keep it up.

Good job excellent word flow keep up the good work 5/5

I agree with the people above beautiful flow...and just an excellent job all around....keep it up

5/5

I like this one a lot =)

That was good see what life is about yeah u go it's a goood life