Nice piece. i like it. :]
the liked the word choice you used too.
you captured the emotion nicely.
5/5. :]

I'm really starting to like tyour poems, again another beautifully written peace which flows really well, with good choice of words
xx

Another emotional poem...
Very enjoyable read...
You know how to write...
Brilliant job, another 5/5

Well done
The second stanza was my favorite
the flow was excellent
the rhyming wasn't forced
the last line summed up the poem well
it didn't leave the audience hanging
The fourth stanza brought back harsh memories
which was really cool in a way
5/5
kaila