Honestly I love this poem so much! This is one of my favorite poems from you, the way you wrote it was quite original and few lines are truly incredible. I love the title too, very unusual atmosphere, but it is really interesting and in this one vocab is truly good.
I didn't like the rhyming in first two lines but other than that you did impressing job with rhymes and all in all it was a huge pleasure to read this poem
Excellent work, keep up!

Wow! loved this one, really, just simply amazing so as to the thought! Great, as always!

I like it a lot! its really good

Amazing! You paint a picture with your words, sad but Beautiful! keep it up! and i'd vote for you but i cant see a box for voting! :S

5/5 this is an outstanding poem. its so vivid and full of emotion. well done.

Definitly a quality poem. very realistic for someone in that same position. without a doubt 5/5

Awww.. that was beautiful, Andrew!!! I loved the entire poem.. it was amazingly wonderful! Thanks so much for your wonderful comments, I actually believe your poetry has improved as well =) I can relate to it a lot more personally. Your choice of words was awesome and the flow was smooth. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

WoW!!! I loved this, its intence and great. Good work :)

Wow loved this poem, i like your work.

5/5

BlAcK RoSe

This is a really great poem. true to me on so many levels...
i've been there, and it sucks. we move on.
=]

Again, amazing,
although i think it would sound better if
"This long loneful life
filled with ever changing strifes"

was changed to

"This long lonely life
filled with ever changing strifes"

5/5

I like this poem. i have broken a poor guy's heart apart. so i can relate to this poem. keep up the good work. read more of my poems.

love, jordan

I lovvv this one !
its so true and deep =] good work
<3

Very nice 5/5

This poem is really good, and the fact of the matter is that this is how love is and we fail to realize that who we love may not love us back. this is deep ill give it a 5

Deep emtion and i love this too much to think is too good to read.. u r great!

Wow, this poem is amazing ,many props to you, and for the record you were too good for her anyway,your heart is to grand to let a shallow soul taint it. keep up the great work and always remember to have fun and be safe in all you do. peace out

Wow love the poem 5/5