Your a pretty good writer.. you use different words and space out your poems nicely, something that i lack lol
good work 5/5

I really enjoyed this one. Reminds me of a song title from Ryan Cabrera. You are very emotional poet!!!

Wow another GREATTTTTTTTTT poem lol.....your poems are all great so far! keep it up!! 5/5

<3 i love you silly

Great poem,, Nice rhyme.. The flow was nice too.. And also the emotion inside this poem is strong and ppowerful...
An enjoyable poem,, keep up the good work.. 5/5

This is amazing, :] i love this one alot, it kinda explains what im going threw kinda, is honestly its always that person you like where you cant let go of them its always them you'll think about i mean sometimes i think it might be love but you know im not sure in a way :| its weird how you can have that happen you know.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

That was awesome thoughts! i feel the sweetness and the nice emotions. its perfectly well done! keep it up and keep on writing like such beautiful one .. great job5/5

Aw, seems you really want someone you can't/ don't have.
Great job at explaining the feeling that you really want.
5/5

*Cindy

What wonderful rhymings you use. Also, the flow was incredible.

All I can say right now is why, as I am quite speechless at this point.

My favorite part is the last sentence; it really tied off the poem.

Wonderful Work

^Men^

What wonderful rhymings you use. Also, the flow was incredible.

All I can say right now is wow, as I am quite speechless at this point.

My favorite part is the last sentence; it really tied off the poem.

Wonderful Work

^Men^

Another great poem, good emotion and nice use of words. Very close to home in regards to the emotion of it and can relate to this easily. You do however need to pay attention to simple words like 'a' 'do' and 'i' there are a few places in this poem where it would of been appropriate to put them instead of leaving it out. for example

"
If I'm tired with it all, why "DO" I want to love you still
"

but its still an awesome poem and very powerful. Love your work well done

Emotions are seriously felt in your words.. flow and rhyming was great.. and this is a different style now.. good job! girls will melt by these words man.. they'd smother you with endless kisses if you offer this poem to them.. lol.. you're good! =]

Beautifully written!
only thought is for the first lines of the first 2 stanzas
change to "A million"
and "hundreds of times"

it sounds as though it would flow better
5/5

I thought the ending was amazing. You have such a great word choice through out tyhis all, it was incredible.The rhyming was great and the flow was very smooth, a well deserved 5/5

I like your writing style

Aw this is a heartfelt poem... i liked it.. but in some parts,the way you worded it made it kinda hard to understand... but overall it was a nice poem..still 5/5

I could relate with the last lines so much. If somebodys occupies both your heart and mind then theyre supposed to be there. As much as you try to block them out .. they just reappear. I learned that the hard way. You cant ignore strong emotions so pursue the one you love cause life is too short not to take risk. Well done .. I truly did enjoy this piece because it brought back memories. *5/5*