"The right place, but I know that I should go far
And you know that I will always be your star" this part is so sweet great poem!! keep writing..love always-

This was a sweet poem, but i felt it was kinda forced in places n some spellings with the words made it seem hard to read. but i think the poem was still a good read

This was just great, but the flow seemed kind of rocky for me.

"Your eyes, they'll always be something so special
Your eyes, they'll always be something but crucial
Blink once more, you put my life to a magical
But at last, I'm sorry for everything but superficial"

^This was my fav. stanza 5/5

*Cindy*

Great poem, I REALLY like the 1st stanza
Your eyes still shining through my blackout heart
Still show me sincerity, right there from the start
Another blink and I can't resist the power of tear
If I could have a little more time to be here

This poem is easy for me to relate to right now. 5/5

Another blink and I can't resist the power of tear
If I could have a little more time to be here

these are my fav line....this was a really good poem. a 5/5 for sure...great word choice and flow. beatifully writen...def got talent

Impressive.

The title caught my attention since everybody tells me that my eyes are the best. :]

I love the way you give descriptions and use the words for every stanza. It's deep in a way it's not. I love the whole point. I LOVE THiS POEM; the 1st best poem I read this year for 08. :]
5/5

Impressive.

The title caught my attention since everybody tells me that my eyes are the best. :]

I love the way you give descriptions and use the words for every stanza. It's deep in a way it's not. I love the whole point. I LOVE THiS POEM; the 1st best poem I read this year for 08. :]
5/5

This was a good piece indeed the only rough spot for my taste though was the last stanza it needs some work but overall this poem was written beautifully nice job
5/5
kaila

Very beautiful and well written.
I really like this poem and it was
really cute. 5/5
<3tay

Another great write :) I always love reading your stuff lol I wish my boy could write like this, occasionally you through in words I havent even heard of and I'm like " i gotta look it up" so thanks 5.5

Aww this was just beautiful and heartfelt. I loved the imagery and how you described the beauty behind the eyes of the person you love ... breathtaking. The words you used fit the mood and concept flawlessly and were enjoyable to read. The first stanza just hooked me and I wanted to read more. Well done in creating this piece *5/5*