To tell you the truth, I absolutely adored this piece. It was breath taking. Two lovers of opposites which constrast perfectly together as one. Beautiful.

Well done on creating such an heart touching piece. I loved it from start to finish. Poetry style, Was interesting. 5/5 from me. ~Mel

Wow, yeah I agree with that.
I didn't get it at first, but then I realized the order in which you wrote it. And how it connects. It's a really nice style, and I love the way you wrote it.

This is interesting, different from anything I've read before. Creative piece, very descriptive and sweet. I personally dislike when someone adds names in the poems but that was nicely done here.
Truly good job!
Keep writing!