Really really good
5/5
keep up the good work

kelsey.X

Thanx for the comment i relate to your poem it seems like that this poetry site is the only site where we all can relate to something. i am the one whos feels like thier alone in the world who gose through these things but i try to rember that everyone gose through the same things but its not all the same situation. your right i have spend alot of my time providing. and caring and what do i get? i guese i should just look for good friends in the right places. i think its good for all of us who are feeling this way. im happy that you found a good friend. have a happy new year.

Another good poem Keith, very well written
5/5

True friends are hard to find but as long as kindess and love is in ur heart dun loose hope for the world need a true friend like u..goodluck..

I can really relate...
life is always unfair!
I'm sorry for the way u feel.. Hope life will treat u better and send u good friends :)
very well-written!
God Bless :)

So now i play this game of life
it makes me so very sad
when they are around i have to act
like shes a friend i never had

that is the saddest stanza I ever read. maybe the saddest poem. I know that kind of friendship it was with my husband and I miss that more then anything else. again you pulled to emotions right out of me .. You keep me from bottling up my feelings can't help but let them out when reading such wonderful writes

Beautifully written!!! You've expressed it very well!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-