The chronicles of the invisible. That is brilliant. 'A' in originality ^^ alot of people can relate to this but youve given it great unique power not just the same old dribble.

The beginning rocks. The rest is okay, maybe work on your flow.

I can relate, great poem 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

,,,,i like it..its just simply amazing....
nice words, simple and precise...

I love it. i can totally relate to it.

This is the poem that describes me. i have never been one to be noticed, and i never will be!! great writing!! :):)

Wow, its great (:
i can relate,
love it
♥

This describes my love life...
no kidding either.
(: great job.

Your an awesome writer xD

It is good..... i feel like i can picture the scene....the holding of the hands....and i understand feeling invisible....

Oh ma god!!! its like reading ma journal entry! - im loving it!! 5/5

Oh this is sad, but really cute,5/5

Hm....invisible, even back then. common theme...i wish it wasn't. :/

you definitely have gotten better, jesse...by like a ton.