I also experience this myself :( Well it flowed well, good job. I have one suggestion :)

Uhm...

In every 1st line of each stanza I think it would be better if... You use a 'line' that repeats in every other stanza.
^^ This is just a suggestion. (It's really hard to change a poem if it's already done.)

My favorite part in this poem is..

The bad things you do in life,
Will also come back in a dream.
^^ I really love those two lines! :)

Anyway I hope you'll win the contest! Keep writing! =D

A great poem!
Wonderfull written.
I believe you'll have to face the bad things you've done, that could happen in your dreams, I think..

My favourite lines are also:
" The bad things you do in life,
Will also come back in a dream. "
Those were really good.

Anyway, really enjoyed reading this.
Let me know if you won the contest =)
Take care!

Hehe, oops =P

I like this cuz i actually had a dream like that last night and this depicted it perfectly