Comments : Your mistress, your other

  • 16 years ago

    by Milton

    I know how this can feel. when you spend so much nice time with them, and then you find out they're living a different them when you're not there. and they're doing other things and you find out about it. =/ I dunno why they forget everything.

    but this one was nice. good stuff =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Great poem nice idea for a write i really like this its very well written!..

    Noelle

  • 16 years ago

    by DazedAndConfused

    Very strong poem,i liked the finish.Keep up the good work:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ridge

    Very good, i rili like it, gd job!

  • 14 years ago

    by BlAcK ShAdOw

    I love this poem well written