Powerful... I like the atmosphere that you created, I could get lost within this piece. I can deeply relate to this which made the whole poem even more captivating and effective for me.
The ending lines add great effect to the whole piece.
Whole poem is filled with greatly expressed emotions and inner darkness that is overwhelming.

Keep up!
5/5 from me

Agree with alexis that was my favorite stanza too, keep up the good work

I think everyone can relate to the nightmares.

I can relate so much with this. excellent job. you put so much emotion into it. 5/5.

Wonderful Job. This is truly an amazing poem. Your wording helps me imagine and understand what you felt while writing this. Try to be happy.
--Jack

Wow, very powerful this is soo, touching and very well written. 5/5

A very powerful and emotional piece.
you captured the emotion in this piece very
well and strongly. the flow was flawless and
i liked your wording here as well. the really
liked the first stanza. this poem was an
attention grabber from start to finish for me.
:] and the ending was powerful as well.
a truly amazing write. :] 5/5

Simply put it is a very magnificent piece of work. I like the way it flows and the suspence that added up until the very last line. Very good, keep up the good work.

5/5
Alexander

This is truely an amazing piece. As a reader it kept me in tune from beginning to end. The emotions were strong, and each line flowed with ease. Great job.

Cicely

This is amazing!!!!! i couldn't stop reading it..it is one of my favorites

That was soooo good :]]
i loved it,

Woah
best poem i've ever read.

Woah! this is really deep in emotions, Liked it very much, good write!

I LIKE THIS POEMS

Love the way u wrote this..gr8

Well...
this poem does give the reader things to think about. What on earth could this poor soul be going through????
I hope you are doing ok.

Take care,

Ingrid

"My dreams consist of nightmares,
Things I shouldn't see,
Things I've always wanted,
Taken far from me." I LOVE THIS PART BECAUSE I CAN RELATE TO IT 100%..AWESOME POEM!!.. =)

I like how this piece flows, your rhyming is good and the pace works well. Unfortunately I didn't quite understand the main line (and it's variations) about nightmares so I could not read as much meaning in this as you perhaps intended. However I like your word choice and your flow, and enjoyed how you bring everything together in the last stanza to wrap the piece up well. Nice work :)

I'm speechless...Sorry for the one liner but imma rate 5/5 and put it in my favs...

beutiful poem and I really feel for you

Excellent piece of writing, full of feeling and insight -well done!
Neil.