This is cool
i like the way it was written i like how u referred him to a puppet on a string that was original
well written and the flow was good
great job keep it up
5/5

This is a great poem! i love it! Will you please read one of my poems and rate...maybe comment to? i would really appreciate it! Thanks!

Your poem is very cool it seems to me if you put some really instramentals with it it could be a very awesome song