Comments : West Texas Sky

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A beautiful write. sounds like texas is a pretty
    amazing place. .the flow was good and i loved
    your word choice. the imgaery was simply
    outstanding. an amazing write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    That was wonderful. It's nice to love your home, and the world. I like the way you see things.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is very well written just one thing, the line

    "Near and far"

    would flow better if it said far and wide in my opinion but still very beautiful... 5/5