Good poems going home. 5/5

Wow ..that was awesome nicely wrting to...keep up the good work hun

Cool.. i felt it so much, i felt like it was my mom talking.. =)
we were not placed on earth to build our dwellings, just to pass by on our way home..
she used to say something like that..^__^

but then ofcourse she could never say it as poetic as the way you wrote it here..
this was absolutely well great..^__^
love!!=D

A very peaceful poem, I enjoyed reading it, wonderful poem