So deep and well written. great poem

You expressed emotions excellently through this piece. I can relate to some parts of it. Whole poem holds very powerful imagery and touching feelings.
The only thing I don't like is punctuation, it ruined flow of the whole piece in some places. I don't want to offend you, this is just my opinion but I really don't understand the function of full stops at the end of every line... you could use commas in some places, that would make the poem even better.

All in all, greatly written piece. It sounds like it's written straight from the heart, filled with emotions and sincerity.

Keep writing!

Great work you are very talented
but seriously..
you not something wrong,you are something definitely right.
i dont know you too well but you have been more of a friend to me than some ive known for a lifetime
i hope you do find what your looking for and if u ever need to talk,im here for you always:)

I loved this line "...wounded by feelings I don't fully comprehend."

What an awesome poem!! deep and dark.. 5/5

>:P

>:P

We all have a birthright...we don't have to earn it or justify our existence in any way.
This is what I believe and what I act upon..

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Honestly spoken, good write, open and withheld at the same time, great...xP

I love it.

Wow...deep...so very sad...but you protrayed your emotions well...it was beautiful.

Deep.. love it ...great job 5/5

Amazing , you expressed yourself so well ... it was a powerful piece!

This comes from the soul...it's so pure and deep...very good. I really liked it =)

--Hannah

I don't know why I feel I can really relate to this poem, but I do. Also I do not know whether this is written about how you feel, but I do know this:

Now forever haunted by dark thoughts and black visions.
And wounded by feelings I don't fully comprehend.
Nights spent alone, without love and hope.
Crying inside always at things that touch me so weirdly.

You're not alone in feeling this. I feel exactly as your words explained. Great write.

I like this one best out of all youre poems (:

Intense. Very deep and relatable (: