Comments : Nothing left to fear

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "confused, scared and alone
    screams suppressed by her own hand
    terrified of what my happen
    if she trys again"

    I loved the whole poem, but I felt these lines had more detail. It was explicit and the way you organized it made them so deep! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I really love the title and it's brilliantly written. Love your wordage...
    You must have talent!!!
    Great poem...
    5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Very interesting piece! the whole lines had really expressed those deep thoughts and its kinda filled of deep emotions.. there are just few lines that u have to check about the spelling i think but all over the poems still great 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Syndicate

    Whao. That was fantastic..and truly inspiring. The flow was smooth and the message clear. You really know how to draw an audience! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I can feel the emotions through the whole poem.. there is a few mis spellings, but other than that its a great poem.. i can relate to this one alot.. keep it up