Amazing poem. beautifully writen. 5/5

Definate 5! Good job

This is really great i love it. You should check out my poems and comment them

This is so powerful and has so much emotion in it! great job! :)

WOW... this is so good... i love this... the words are really great, and the flow is perfect... 5/5

Really good beat to this! brilliant poem!

Good!

A very simple, yet very direct and powerful poem. I liked the way you worded it and it wasn't forced at all. The emotions were displayed really well even though it was a short poem. Great Work.

Greta xx

I CANT HELP BUT LOOK AT THIS POEM OVER AND OVER ITS VERY POWERFUL BUT YET BEAUTIFUL

Wow, i really like this poem

Hey great poem...... a good one worth reading i like it...... amazing........=)