Hey, good on ya stranger.
It's hard to come across a nature poem that really captures my attention. I have just recently written my very own nature poem - or atleast I gave it a shot, and it's probably the hardest time I've had writing in a long time haha.
I just find it so hard to express something that I haven't devoted alot of time to.
You've just proved to me that it's possible to express much more than just what I see in nature. Also what I hear. And the sound, somehow, brang out some feeling as well.
Awesome job. :)

Wow (looks at you) that was simply brilliant!!! (hugs you) I could see that in my mind, it was beautiful!!!

Very original I enjoyed it

Wow, really good! Never read a nature poem this well! Personally, I can only write haikus. No poems like this.

Reading what you have written here reminds me of myself. I love nature poems, and I always try to be creative as possible when writing them. You have a wonderful talent with writing them. I know it's hard trying to capture the readers with poems of nature, but what you've done hear is actually quite magnificent. It has a few bumps and glitches, but those can be easily fixed by reading the poem out loud to yourself; then you can hear the flow yourself. I always say put yourself in the readers place. If you can read it out loud and find no errors, then you're good to go. Keep up the great work! I am truly looking forward to reading more of your work.

Letty

I really like this :).

I agree with Letty... I think nature and it's wonders could fill more poets hearts with better words than most love poems. I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They arent old and dull like so may other love poems. Im sure mine fall into that category once in awhile. I found your work very interesting. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.