What to do...

by kara   Jan 5, 2008


You said that you loved
what was i suppose to say
i said i love you back and
you took my hand
you put your hand on my face
and kissed my lips
i turned all red and knew that you were the one
my true love
my soul mate
a few months later
i saw you with another girl
you were kissing her
and from then on i knew that i was
lying to myself that you weren't the one
you saw me standing there
i busted out crying
i ran away
i wouldn't talk to you or really to anyone
from all that we did together
was a waste of time
one day you stopped and i let you talk to me and you said that you didn't kiss her she kissed you,
i didn't know what i was getting into
i hated myself for jumping to conclusions
you said you were sorry for anything that you had done wrong and i said why are you sorry for something that you didn't even do?
and he said because i love you!

its not that good i just kinda free handed it and it came out but i know that i still need work with the poem writing and all but i am still getting there and all that

but i hope that you liked fit!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    It was a very good poem. It does need some work on sturcture and word flow. Everybody has to start somewhere. The meaning was great and powerful. All in all a great poem. 5/5 from me.

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