Excellent job, I loved the choice of wording used =]

This poem had a nice flow to ^^

5/5!!

Wow...
This is truly powerful and effective. Original piece, with vivid imagery and great, eery descriptions.
I like your choice of words in the whole poem and the flow is great from the beginning to the end.
I could feel all those emotions that run wildly through the lines which is excellent.
I can't chose my favorite part, every stanza is equally amazing.
Greatly done!
5/5 from me

Hmm wonderful! cant believe u really can make this kind of poet at young age! the imagery was amazing specially the style was powerful and impressive! 5/5

keep it up!

Great read once again. i love your poems. Your flow is great and emotions so strong. I love the choice of words.
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Taegan Emily

Hey. This really is an amazing and original style and I really liked the entire piece. I been experimenting with different rhyme patterns or even none rhyming but this is the best. Keep it up and write more.

Great job!!! i love it

Wow!!! Amazing, simply amazing! The way you wrote this piece is absolutely powerful, so effective tones you created here. I love the way you expressed emotions, very unique and also remarkable. Only thing that came to my mind after reading this superb poem was wow! Honestly I enjoyed in whole piece and you showed in this one that you are talented.

Love diz poem iz amazin 5/5

Powerful read!
Intense and full of emotion... Great job and keep writing!

5/5
Athena

I felt you did a very well job with this. Your emotions are so powerful and intense and you express them well in this piece. I love the style it's very original and makes your poem very easy to read. Keep up the good work. Nik

This poors alot of emotion .. Kinda creepy if you ask me haah , but it's best like that . Really well done , 5/5

Very interesting i like it!

Amazing poem!!! Very powerful. Definitely a 5/5 =)