Aww, so sad! this is exactly how i hope my daughter dont feel.. this is such a heartfelt poem

So pretty, and so powerful... i'm jealous you are such a great writter, this has alot of different messages depending on how the poems interpreted (sp?) very good... 5/5

I like this piece... Good topic and written in a good way. Deep poem, very touching.
My favorite stanza is:

-She's just a young little girl
With only 16 years of age.
She has nowhere to run to,
Except to the arms of a strange man.-

You created good flow in every stanza.

Keep writing!