I love this... It is endlessly powerful and unique, different from anything I've read before. The emotions inside are truly intense and whole poem is absolutely powerful. The idea for the piece is also interesting along with your creative, very vivid descriptions that fill every stanza.
I can't chose my favorite part, whole poem is fantastic.
Keep writing!
5/5

This was honeslty unique and creative. I hvan't read anything like this before your mind definitly has wondered into something interesting here. Your sarcasm I adored it was bitter and sweet but also really deep. I liked the depressive vibe you portrayed over the atmosphere it was definitly full of truth. A favorite part? that's impossible. I could not pick out a favorite part im not even going to try. I may aswell copy and paste the whole piece and say that it is my favorite part. I loved the title of this, it was original. I don't know how you came up with this idea but it's fantastic. Well done. An amazing poem. ~Mel

Wow that was really different to stuff i have read and it was really good congrats!

I really like this it was very different