I think it is a great poem.

Very expressive poem toward your sister i hope she can see clearly how much you need her at the moment and what a wonderful sister you are to care so much.

This is a good poem well expressed and even though you wrote it short notice its still good. keep writing

This poem is so sad and i think i like it becuase i can relate to it. my twin sister died two years ago and i still can't move on. thanx for writing this.

I like it. It has allot of emotion in it. Plz comment on one of mine.