Comments : Between Breaths

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very beautiful poem.
    i really liked the whole poem in as a whole.
    and the ending i especially loved.
    a great write. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I never read a poem about a kiss. but i did very much enjoy it. very sweet and loving. great piece of writing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I like this, i really like the flow, and the feellings behind this poem... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love your love poetry. There are only a few of people that write truly beautiful love poems filled with emotions that are not clishe.
    Whole piece is filled with heartfelt emotions and I like it from the beginning to the end. It is captivating and sweet, superbly written. Amazing piece, so touching and emotional.