I love your word flow and the emotion you put into this piece.
"Her face is sad, a tear in her heart
Tears run from her bright blue eyes
As though they decided to copy the skies" creates such a powerful image in my mind.
Really inspiring and true in death's not to fear but lost time.

This poem is very sad. yet its very strong. i enjoyed reading this very much. this poem has alot of potential

Aha,,,, i enjoyed the story very interesting! there is really a good rhyming and the flow was great! this is beautifuly written just keep on writng all what u feel and keep it up!5/5

I love this poem! There is so much emotion, and the message is so strong, sad story. Happens to to many people! Your flow was great and so were your choice of words!