Now the waters pouring down
and i have cried for so long
this happens when i think of you
so i ask myself what went wrong
you are my reason to live
desperately i need you here with me
my heart is broke beyond repair
maybe now i will be free

My favorite part of the poem =)

But wow the ending was great and yet again another 5/5

Noelle

I like this part the most too!
and what i've noticed is that the 1st&last parts are kinda calmer than this ("Now the waters pouring down....") coz here it's like we hear sound of water, crying.... (just my impression). I can compare this poem with a rain - starting with pouring, then it kinda stormy, and finally calms down.... that's what i've imagined when reading your poem)))

Lizaveta

Beautiful... lyrics of course, im presuming... I love it. Usually not something I like reading but it had a great flow to it