As usual, you write good poems, i liked the repetion of "let's fly away"

Ingrid
What a wonderful job you have done on this form. It is very beautiful. Great imagery and word choices.
Love Cindy

A really soft and gentle poem you have penned. The feeling of love and longing was felt throughout this entire piece which was a joy to read. a great write hun.. well done

You already made me fly with those words, this is such a sweet poem...so sensual. Words used only when someone is in love....have a great time

all the best and take care

BEAUTIFUL!!! I love this. <3

Well done... this is soo beautiful... I enjoyed reading the whole poem... every line was more beautiful than the next

Wow, you're an amazing poet. I really love this poem. It's beautiful. Every word fits. 5/5

Wow, you're an amazing poet. I really love this poem. It's beautiful. Every word fits. 5/5

I`m sorry I haven`t read your work before my club sister,but I will definately read more, this is very romantic and sincere a wonderful read.

This is a wonderful poem, the love and beauty was stunning, spectacular i say. :D

5/5 david

You really have talent =]

gotta add you to my favorites

This is a very cute poem I loved it a lot...i heard many love poems which are similar too others yours is different but great ....=)

I love the way you write the type of poem!!! I enjoyed reading this as well as learning about the style!! ^___^!!! Lovely!

Wonderful Rondeau, Kudos!!!

When you walked into my life, smiling...
You broke through my walls and won me
^^ i really really really loved how you worded this i mean i just started dating this new guy and i swear he did just this i feel like i had spent so much time guarding my heart and making sure no one could get in to hurt me than he just giggled and smiled at me with eyes locked and i just lost it!

great poem! i mean emotion and everything was right on : ) 5/5

You were a recommended read and I'm so glad I did. What beautiful words you have constructed for us to enjoy. I'm one that is in love with love ^-^ your poems are amazing .