Comments : Take these dreams

  • 16 years ago

    by heather

    I loved it ;) 5/5

  • Now this poem, I absolutely loved it. It shows a lot of feeling in it and the emotion was absolutely amazing. I can't find absolutely nothing wrong with this poem. I just absolutely loved this one. Good job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very deep and beautiful. I loved this poem! The flow was good, the word choice was good, and the concept was great! 5/5