Kaylee
For a first attempt you did a wonderful job!
Love Cindy

This is my first time reading this kind of poem. The structure is unique as there aren't a lot of poems in the shape of a diamond! The way you wrote it was nice and you explained the whole concept nicely. Good job 5/5

Awesome poem! Way to go on this one. I loved the emotion. You have real talent, dont ever waste that!

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5/5

Excellent job on this challenging form!