Wow, that was really, really great! your poems are AWSOME! i look forward to when you write more!

Wow that is good.
You poem made me think.

Great job keep it up

Wow! amazing. i love it. its so emotive. i love the words chosen. great imagery too.
xx
Taegan Roberts

I loved this poem! exspecially the part where you said:
We've both got the pieces to
Eachother's broken heart.

thats so cute!
5/5