And again a GREAT poem...I have a poem that is some what like this 5/5

Noelle

It seems no matter what your age, friendships can cause heartache and pain. even more so when others get involved.
keep writing your feeling down. when i do, it helps me to move on, but sad to say the pain remains. ( for me anyway) great writing.

I no how you feel an no matter how hard you try you cant forget how you used to be i no i cant i realy like ur poem keep up the good work !!!

Oh, what a great poem of your, i love it. This one is perfect as it seems in my minds eye, your doin a great job and don't stop keep on shining!!

This is a great poem...i am going through the same situation...keep up the good work

Great poem... I've had quite the same situation... I like that in addition to the story of your friendship, you've added that idea about innocent angel:

innocent angel couldnt be
guilty of hating both you and me

It makes the poem deep i think...

"but im still here and so are you
there really isnt room for two"
another line that I simply love.
you come up with some strong points in your writing. I admire that.

Wow!! what a deep poem so much emotion and hurt lol not saying hurt is a good thing just saying that you can feel what you feel deep inside...Lol i wrote a poem alot like this one but it was for a poetry contest and my teacher took it and i never got a chance to submit it...But your poems are so wonderful!!!
:)
Kit Kat

Kayli,

A very sad poem, but the story is told well.
You did good on this verse!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid