Comments : His Last Gift

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Whoa. Crazily amazing. the words are so beutiful and in the right place its scary. I LOVE IT. its amazing. i especially like how the bird changes and dies as well. AMAZING.
    again another great write

    xx
    Taegan Emily

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Anonymous

    That was really, really great! you write amazing poems!