Amazing yet simple; my kind of poems

I love this poem! It was so well written, and I loved the message. Thank you for the comment on my poem. As to your question... yes sorta. mainly the last stanza... but the rest worked.

Aw. that's pretty.

Amazing job...very well writen and has good flow 5/5

This is a lovely poem, damont
heartfelt, strong and pure.
i really like the flow of the poem, your style of writing happens to be a type that i paricuarly love
keep writing your doing a great job
Sarah -xo