I liked it. i know how you feel. im going through that now.

I liked this poem as well. It tugged my heart 'cause I know how you feel.

~love~

Kayla this poem is very sad i am so sorry about what you are going through

But, I've made a decision,
I'm gonna use my heart as bait,
Hoping someday that you'll take it,
As I sit here and wait.

I really loved the ending of this poem!

Beautifully said.. haha i did the same a while ago!! it was a good read. funny how as of right now i am talking to my ex whom me and him related to this.. crazyy haha

well good poem dear. your a great poet and i decided your going in my favorites

Eh, love...you should never wait for anyone.
if they love you they'll come to you.

anyway i didn't see any mistakes 5/5.

Never be a plan b. Either they love you or they don't. When you care that much about somebody, it's pure out beautiful, and it shouldn't be abused so it should be a take it or leave it situation. Nobody deserves otherwise

Nice flow of the poem and it's so true just still love that person. If something better comes around go for it