Comments : A Message to the World

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I love this poem!!! it tells a story of sadness and pain, but also speaks of new hope. if anyone needs to be convinced hurting people is wrong, this poem/story would certainly end their doubts!!! great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by LexiAlexanderz Manicluv

    Omg i loved that poem, ur really good. that almost made me cry... :)

  • 16 years ago

    by xbxdrfntx

    Hey this poem is awesome. its beyond good!!! great job

  • 16 years ago

    by The Girl From Yesterday

    Wow. Thats...... Intense. I love it! I can relate so much to it, it has such a strong and meaningful message. There were a few places where the flow was a bit shaky, but overall, it was really good!

  • 16 years ago

    by natyy

    Wow...i really, really like this poem! 5/5!!

  • 16 years ago

    by lyrics

    Spectacular.

  • 16 years ago

    by DryMyTears

    Amazing!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    And have cute me oh so deep.
    should be CUT not cute

    otherwise this is wow.
    May I use this for a poetry booklet for school.
    Please/thank you
    it was a perfect read.
    5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Wow. you have an amazingly beautiful message for the world. thank you for not hiding it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Kerry Gardiner

    This is an amaxing poem once you start to read it you just can't stop good work

  • 16 years ago

    by DontForgetTonight

    Wow, this is absolutely fantastic.
    Keep writing (:
    Please =D

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessie

    If i could rate this one million times i would rate it five out of ficve.... I usually don't realy long poems but that kept me interested and intrigued... incredible poem... It is now added to my favourites!

    - xclumsyonex