Comments : A Rare Friend

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    You gave me your strength
    No more feeling alone
    Touched my heart with love
    Helping me stand on my own

    Cindy...i really will be someone else if i start feeling the diff you tell me i have made in your life, all this time i have just been myself and i am so glad that you like me for that.

    I'll hold you close forever
    Connected from the start
    Spirits melding across miles
    You'll always live in my heart

    Only lucky people gets so much of love & i am glad to be one, thank you so much.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Cindy,

    How very touching, this poem to your number one male fan, hehe!
    I bet he smiled from ear to ear when he read it...

    Love Ingrid 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Now this one was just gold!..

    "Breathing life into my soul"

    this line had such an impact on me.. another mind blowing piece!! how lucky the both of you are to find one another, very touching indeed.

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwww.. you and your poems are great honey

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a beautiful poem!
    Seems you have a very deep frindship,, that's great!

    I really love this stanza:
    " You gave me your strength
    No more feeling alone
    Touched my heart with love
    Helping me stand on my own "

    That was just beautiful!
    I loved reading it.
    Take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Cindy, Such a beautiful penned tribute to your friend, I'm sure he will gladly to have a friend like you... that's why they call you a wonderful friend, you do take care over there, i will be back again soon....Till next time....Hugs.

  • 16 years ago

    by ingrid

    I like this poem alot! is preaty much true this has happend too me friends like that are rare to find and when you find them than you loose them so yeah i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    That was such a beautiful tribute to a friend.Friendships like the one you have found don't come along very often and I am sure like the friendship I have with my best friend its a friendship you will treasure forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    I can completely relate to this poem. Amazing job. The flow and just everything about makes it beautiful. Nice job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by sam

    What a sweet poem always keep that friend close.

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jo

    Amazing poem and definately one i could realte too

    loved it!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    Excellent it certainly is!
    I love the depth and defiance and promise hidden within the last lines of each verse.
    A Pleasure to be seated right behind you on your journey to recovery.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats beautiful cindy, again i luv the last line bringing the whoel piece to a soft end xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    If only I could have the type of friendship that you know and have so well! It was beautiful! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentRebuke

    Great job, I love the simplicity of your wording in this poem, it makes for a very elegant flow. I especially like the first stanza, I think we have all had that one person who helped us to stand on our own again. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Great short poem, loved it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, such friend and such poem.
    awesome writting indeed

    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    This is beautiful dedication, being a witness to this wonderful friendship, all i would say there always be nitin and cindy like ppl when time comes .

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    I really enjoyed that, I loved the ryhme sceme and the message you put into it, for your friend.
    great job
    polaroid

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Good friends like this are hard to find. You are lucky and I'm happy for your that you have someone like that. Very beautiful poem..