I love you

by XxNeverlettinyougoxX   Jan 9, 2008


I never knew i could fall so fast
Especially when every one says that we'll never last
Others may look at us and talk
But they don't understand
The love we have for each other when we're hand in hand
I think about you day and night
Sometimes i wonder is this right?

I love it when you hold me tight so i know you'll always be there
even through all the fights our love we'll always share

I love the way you write me songs and the little things you do
I would fly the seven seas to get a hug from you

Your laugh is the cutest, your smile amazing and your hidden sensitivity could drive me crazy

Your touch is soft, you're kisses never-ending, and my love for you is everlasting..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Wow.... beautiful love, beautiful! It was so sweet, it touched my heart. Your choice of words, perfectly! The flow, flawless. I think this is an amazing piece and you should definitely not ever even think for a second about giving up poetry! I can totally relate to this piece, I thought about my beloved Tyler whenever I read it. Great job! Keep it up, darling! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra

    I can definatley relate to that one. It is way better than my poems. 5/5