WOW. Its all I can say....

First off I love the title. It really captured my attention and compelled me to read more.

I liked how you started it with the imagery and the descriptions. It put me in this setting and made everything clear while I was reading.

"You planned to take my heart, because to break my hearts what you yearn"

^I didn't like this flow of this line. Something seemed off so I'm sure after reading it a coulple of times you can revise it.

"Trapped in this over-sized aquarium, of which you plan to take control
You want to leave me crushed in the wake, reduced to abiding in a fish bowl"

^The imagery and flow here was just flawless and you trule painted a picture.

My fave stanza has to be the second. It was filled with such flawless imagery and you described everything with great ease so that everyone can understand. It was as if you were telling a story and I enjoyed following along eager to find out how it ends.

"Youre plan is complete and you plan to snatch control from me"
^Simple mistake .. I think you mean "your"

I loved the ending. The mood you created with your words was just wonderful and fit everything perfectly. This piece was refreshing to read because it isnt like anything I have read on this site before so thank you for sharing.

Well done *5/5*

The flow was a bit off in some lines although unlike the other poem i looked at this one kept me reading
it was a bit long but well written
5/5