Comments : Damn you, Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    Time isn't always a bad thing. Keeps us moving forward. Although we like to think back to the pass, we can't live there. It would be nice, but won't happen. The best we can do is try to make new memories. In doing that, you'll look back on THOSE when the even more distant future comes.

    I like poems that make me think.
    Good job on this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by David Ensor

    Wow, i really like this poem. reading it made me realize i need to call some of my old friends, damn u time! but seriously you have something about the way you write that i connect with, very real, very poignant. i cant wait to read the next one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh wow great poem it really grasped my attention your poems have that kind of affect on me great piece here

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe, I liked this. It had an excellent meaning and your rhyming stuck out to me.
    I didn't really get grabbed into the poem/prose, but I still did enjoy it, espically the point. We all loose someone or something special to us at time.

    Nonethless, good job.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gizmo

    Reverse your stubborn hands, what a great pharse.

    amazing personafication.
    good vocabulary.
    again amazing poem from you.

    'the friends you sting.' not very strong line though.

    overall very good

  • I eco everyone else: great poem. it really speakes to a lot of people and captures what they're feeeling extremly accuratly..... including me.