Nice 1..really..

A very beautiful piece

U got the real attitude..goodluck and keep it up...things are not bas as it seem today u kno..as the song goes..there is sunshine after the rain...&( ^ ~ ^ )&..smile..

I love your style, keep them coming. This is great. 5/5

Again, the hurt, heartbreak and betrayal speaks volumes in this poem. You miss someone dearly and it's very saddening that such a wonderful part of your life can be thought of as anything different than beautiful.

Well i thought that was great. Your words say it all. good job. thanks for your comment. Just thought i would try something new im glad it worked

A lot of hurt in there but a lot of spirit too. Well written.