Comments : Please

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla

    Short, but beautiful. I fell in love with every single line. These two lines were my favorite though,

    Then I'd whisper like the wind beneath the willow trees,
    The screams of "Come back!" with the added whisper "Please..."

    I'm not sure why, but I thought that it was amazing. You are such a talented writer, please don't stop writing! Keep it up darling. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 12 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I think this poem is so hotttt and I agree with every word of it. I feel the emotion and I can visualize the sceens in my head. This is so awesome and keep up the excellent work. Excellent. job well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    I love it.
    It's short and simple.
    I really like poetry like this.

    I'd love to see more like this, "please."

  • 11 years ago

    by El

    Short but so sweet.
    Very emotional.
    i dont kno how you do it but all your poems seem to be amazing.