Sorrow, fear and self-loathing. These poisons of the mind can kill a person faster then any pollutant of the body.

Good poem.
The emotion was shown and the imagery was great.
The flow and wording was good.
Keep it up 5/5

Thank you for your comments, and for that i shall read your poems and be very honest about them. this one was really good i loved it. 5/5